2008年12月5日 星期五

RJ4孫滐

Book:Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallow
Author:J.K.Rowlimg
Publishing:Bloomsbury Publishing Plc
Page1647~295(~ch19)

Thanks to Kreacher's help, Harry finally found out that the locket
was now belong to Umbridge, who was one of the officer of Ministry of Magic.However. the ministry was under control of Voldemort.Therefore,they made a plan to slip into the ministry.To find other Horcruxs, they started wander from place to place.On their way, some argiments growing, and Ron even left the at last.What's woreis that Harry's wond even broke when they visit Gordic Hollow.It seems thatthe condion couldn't be even worse.

Ifound that it's hard to write Harry Potor's reading journal since it includes a lot of details which is very important in the following story.Should I just focus on the outline , or I have to mention the impotant details ?

COECO 4978003 孫滐
(剛剛忘了打名子,這是重寄)

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1. You don't have to include too much detail. Just key points in development. For our reading journal, your personal experience in reading and reading skill development is equally important.
2. Please proof read before submitting your writings. This journal contains many spelling and technical errors which can be easily corrected.
3. Try harder next time.